Rhyme Poem
My treat is big, it's something I want to eat
I'm big, chunky and also a monkey
Ree, I’m very big. I’m a humble bee
Hey, look a Christmas tree, is it free
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Rhyme Poem
My treat is big, it's something I want to eat
I'm big, chunky and also a monkey
Ree, I’m very big. I’m a humble bee
Hey, look a Christmas tree, is it free
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Very simple rhyming poem Tom - do you think you could add another verse? Who is Ree?
ReplyDeleteMiss Gill.
Nice riming tom love the poem
ReplyDeleteFrom Joshua k
ReplyDeletenice one Tom I LOVE the poem but I dont think your a monkey
ReplyDeletefrom Jack